Alright, here is the posting format I would like you to adhere to

Zoid and Pilot Stats (you can copy and paste this from your profile, sans any rp portions, first yoru stats, mental ability and such, then your zoid stats)

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RolePlay

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Action Summary



How you choose to format the latter two sections matters little to me as long as I can understand it.


BATTLEFIELD
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The Quarry
The miners here didn't seem to have much sense of direction in making this quarry, and followed the rock vein in whatever direction it went, pulling out ground as they pleased. The result was a huge hole in the ground that didn't follow any apparent pattern in shape. The center of the quarry is approximately circular, with five twisting arms extending away from it at eerily regular intervals. There are only two ramps into the quarry, which the zoids would take to enter. Both combatants will start on the quarry floor.

Details; the arms are at regular intervals, such as a standard five pointed star, and curve off after the opening. The Main quarry is much larger, and would take a liger a full minute to cross. Each arm is wide enough for three ligers to run next to eachother, and just as long as the quarry is wide. So being in an arm has obvious cover advantages. However, missed shots, or particularly explosive shots, may hit the quarry walls and cause falling rock. The only place where this is not a potential problem is in the main quarry.

Posting order! round one: *flips a coin* Clarence first

Character's Name: Clarence Alexander (CLiX)
Pilot for the Guard

GL 1
0 AP
4 Skill Points -

Mental Ability: 2
Reflexes: 1
Proficiency: 1 (Melee)

1,500 Monetary Credits
30 RP Creds


Zoid Bay:

Zoid: Lightning Saix
Cheetah

Internal Slots- 2
Speed- 20
Agility- 40
Heat Index- 20

CPU Slots- 2
External Hardpoints- Body: (1 Left / 1 Right) Limbs: (None)

Armor- Head: 5 / Body: 37 left, 37 right / Legs (x4): 10 / Tail: 10

Specials

Lightning Beam Cannons

A pair of 100mm beam cannons covering the back of the zoid. Capable of firing powerful laser beams in the direction the zoid is facing.

70dp

30mm Laser Repeaters

Located on the Saix's forehead are two 30mm laser repeaters. Each repeater is capable of firing consistently, spitting out roughly 12 shots per second. Though the silver mount they're on offers no turret what-so-ever, they fire where the Saix's head faces, and are quite accurate because of that.

20dp

Hardened Alloy Teeth and Claws

Razor-sharp fangs and rows of equally sharp teeth adorn the Saix's mouth while its paws contain sharp claws of their own.

50dp

Streamline Drafting

If more than one Saix is in the same battle they can use their body design to draft off each other and by continually leaping the front zoid gain lots of speed and increase maneuverability adding damage to the next attack.

+10dp to next attack, increased rate of evasion by 10% per extra Saix


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Battle Phase:

His breath came in ragged spasms, his chest heaving as he sat in the pilot of his Lightning Saix. His palms were sweaty, and beads of perspiration dripped down his face, though the climate control in his cockpit clearly displayed an even sixty degrees Fahrenheit. Hazel eyes gazed around the cavern as he piloted Ihara down the ramp. He released the controls as he reached the bottom, letting the Zoid slow to a stop. He took a large breath as he began to talk to himself, after each tiny speech, he inhaled deeply, held it for a brief moment, before exhaling.

"I can do this..."

"Nothing will stand in my way..."

"I can do this!"

He spied his opponent across the large cavern, and grasped his controls. Jamming them forwards, he jammed into high speed, crossing the distance with as much speed as Ihara could muster. His finger slid to the primary trigger, loosing a blast from the Lightning Beam Cannons at Brad and his Saix, directed at the front right leg. Not a mere moment after he shot, he twisted off to the left, aiming for the north-most tunnel. Rolling his shoulders as he manipulated the controls, he surged his Zoid in an erratic pattern, whilst still jamming the throttle to the max.

"I can do this... I really-- No, we really can!"

A low grumble rolled from the Zoid as the slid into the dark hole, wrenching the controls as the fled deeper into the arm-like tunnel. He kept glancing at his monitors to see if Brad had fallen into pursuit, constantly watching the twisting tunnel before him. He dropped his speed a bit, allowing him a bit more control around the turns, and perhaps a bit more control if Brad decided to follow.

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Battle Summary:

Wow, really short post, but I guess that's expected from a G1 pilot with only two feats and one reflex point. ._.;

Jamming the controls forwards to cross the cavers. (Activated Sprint, to increase Aim and Evasion by 20% and speed by 1)
Fired one round from the Lightning Beam Cannons. (Attack, 70DP)
Running in an erratic manner on the way to the northernmost cave. (Dodge)

I have no more reflex points. Used em all up. Err... it all up.

If anything needs to be changed, shoot me a PM, and we can discuss the problemo's.

Character Name: Brad Barker
Team Sniper

RP credits: 0
Credits: 300
Debt: 0

0 AP
Growth Level: 1
4 Skill Points
Attributes:
Mental Ability: 3
Reflexes: 1
Proficiency: 0
Rifles: 0
Cannons: 0
Machine Guns: 0
Melee Weapons: 0

Z O I D S T A T S

Lightning Saix
Cheetah

Internal Slots Used- 0/2 Speed- 20 Heat Index- 20
CPU Slots Used- 0/2 Agility- 40
External Hardpoints- Body: (1 Left / 1 Right) Limbs: (None)

Hardpoints-
Body Left: unused
Body Right: unused

Armor- (w/ Armor)
Head: 5 (55)
Body Left: 37 (87)
Body Right: 37 (87)
Front R Leg: 10 (60)
Front L Leg: 10 (60)
Rear R Leg: 10 (60)
Rear L Leg: 10 (60)
Tail: 10 (60)

C U R R E N T A R M O R

NanoTech Armor
This barely there armor proves that less is more and more is not always better. Unlike other armor platings, NanoTech is bonded to a zoids base armor and does not require any external hard points. The unique properties of this armor allow it to regenerate damage and alter its physical properties.
This armor can regenerate 30 armor points to any damaged section each round, up to two sections can regenerate each round. NanoTech armor is also able to alter is physical structure to harden it self against certain types of damage (Heat, Energy, explosive, slashing or stabbing damage, etc). A charging feat must be used to activate this feature and the type of damage must be stated. While active this feature will reduce damage from the chosen type by 40%.
Armor Points: 50 per section


S P E C I A L S

Lightning Beam Cannons
A pair of 100mm beam cannons covering the back of the Zoid. Capable of firing powerful laser beams in the direction the Zoid is facing.
70dp

30mm Laser Repeaters
Located on the Saix's forehead are two 30mm laser repeaters. Each repeater is capable of firing consistently, spitting out roughly 12 shots per second. Though the silver mount they're on offers no turret what-so-ever, they fire where the Saix's head faces, and are quite accurate because of that.
20dp

Hardened Alloy Teeth and Claws
Razor-sharp fangs and rows of equally sharp teeth adorn the Saix's mouth while its paws contain sharp claws of their own.
50dp

Streamline Drafting
If more than one Saix is in the same battle they can use their body design to draft off each other and by continually leaping the front Zoid gain lots of speed and increase maneuverability adding damage to the next attack.
+10dp to next attack, increased rate of evasion by 10% per extra Saix

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Narrative:

As Brad arrives at the battle area he took some time to look around and assess the scene. “Man I am nervous but I’m ready to do this! Jax are you ready to lay a beat down?” Jax sends out a rooooar!! As Brad wiped his sweaty palms on his jacket and checked to make sure everything is online with his Zoid he scoped the arena to spot Clarence across the way. “There he is. I am going to do this as quickly as possible”, thought Brad as the battle judge sent the warning to begin battle!

Brad started to head towards Clarence as a shot flew towards him. Brad lined up Jax with Clarence’s Lightning Saix and mashed the trigger of the lightning beam cannon (70DP) which sent a shot directly at the front right leg then immediately he punched the controls to the left to dodge the oncoming shot. After gaining back his composure Brad then tugged the controls forward to get Clarence back in his sight.

Brad shot down the pathway after Clarence and the natural tunnel of the mine made for a perfect shot. Brad did a double press on the trigger to send two more lightning beam cannon shots (140DP) directly at both rear legs. Brad then said, “Even if they do not hit they will hit some rocks in the area and those definitely have to connect with Clarence.” Brad to make sure nothing could come from Clarence he started to pounce back and forth to avoid any fire or rocks that may come his way while keeping his speed up. With Clarence still in his sights Brad fired a round of laser repeaters (20DP) directly at the rear of Clarence and then jumped behind a rock structure to avoid what could come next.

Battle Summary

Pretty cut and dry too…if this is not correct PM me and I will adjust as well.

1a. Brad Lined up Jax with Clarence’s LS and mashed the trigger of the Lightning Beam Cannon. (70DP)
1b. Brad Dodged the oncoming shot(Dodge)

2a. Brad did a double press on the trigger(Double attack; caused 140 DP) Used only Reflex
2b. Brad pounced back and forth down the tunnel to avoid any fire or rocks.(Dodge)

3a. Brad fired a round of laser repeaters (Attack; 20DP)
3b. Jumped behind a rock structure to avoid what could come next (Dodge)

OOC notes:

Clarence
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You used the word ‘jammed’ three times in one paragraph, it’s alright and a common thing for people to do, but keep an eye out for overusing words in your writing. Besides, if he ‘jams’ and ‘wrenches’ his controls all the time when he pilots, he’s going to be replacing those controls soon, just pointing it out for ya to think about. Please refrain from italicizing something if it’s supposed to be speech, since italics are popularly used, both on this site and in writing to indicate thoughts. A good post, I liked that you included an intro.

Brad,
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I noticed you switch from present tense to past tense and back in your post several times. You need to pick one and stick with it. Also, it’s dramatic to say ‘rooooar!!’ but it’s still incorrect, One o and one ! will suffice. That’s just a peeve of mine though, others might not care. Finally, comma’s are your friend, and MS word grammar check won’t pick up when you should use them. If you say it out loud and pause, then there should likely be a comma where you paused. Don’t want to sound too negative though, good job thinking strategically in your actions, and a good post overall, thank you.

Note; because Clarence is new and didn’t realize quite how the actions worked, I allowed him to throw in a shot of his laser repeaters right after the lightning cannon shot, and before his dodge

The Battle!

Clarence started the action at a sprint, Brad approaching a little more slowly and firing at his oncoming opponent. Unfortunately, he underestimated how fast the oncoming Saix was going and Clarence was out of the way easily before the shot passed. Clarence’s shot on the other hand, did manage to make contact as planned, and the powerful shock sent the leg of Brad’s liger into an instant freeze.

As Clarence turned to dive into one of the cavern arms, his peppering spray from his laser repeater flew wide, barely marking the right of Brad’s Saix.

Brad pursued Clarence into the tunnel, and though the saix was still agily avoiding the double shot from the lightning cannons, Clarence forgot to watch out for the falling rocks that battered the body of his zoid. Then distracted by the racket from the debris and a few damage indicators in his cockpit, Brad’s laser repeaters met their mark perfectly, effectively taking out the rear right leg of his opponents Saix

Brad

Speed: 16
Agility: 32
Armor Current / Max
Head: 55/55
Body Left: 87/87
Body Right: 77/87
Front R Leg: 0/60
Front L Leg: 60/60
Rear R Leg: 60/60
Rear L Leg: 60/60
Tail: 60/60

Clarence

Speed: 16
Agility: 32
Armor Current / Max
Head: 5/5
Body Left: 15/37
Body Right: 22/37
Front R Leg: 10/10
Front L Leg: 10/10
Rear R Leg: 0/10
Rear L Leg: 10/10
Tail: 10/10


ROUND 2

Both combatants are in the northmost tunnel, Brad is behind an outcropping of rock. Both zoids are suffering from a system freeze in one leg, penalties to speed and agility are noted. It is Brads turn to post first.

Character Name: Brad Barker
Team Sniper

RP credits: 0
Credits: 300
Debt: 0

0 AP
Growth Level: 1
4 Skill Points
Attributes:
Mental Ability: 3
Reflexes: 1
Proficiency: 0
Rifles: 0
Cannons: 0
Machine Guns: 0
Melee Weapons: 0

Z O I D S T A T S

Lightning Saix
Cheetah

Internal Slots Used- 0/2 Speed- 20 Heat Index- 20
CPU Slots Used- 0/2 Agility- 40
External Hardpoints- Body: (1 Left / 1 Right) Limbs: (None)

Hardpoints-
Body Left: unused
Body Right: unused

Speed: 16
Agility: 32
Armor Current / Max
Head: 55/55
Body Left: 87/87
Body Right: 77/87
Front R Leg: 0/60
Front L Leg: 60/60
Rear R Leg: 60/60
Rear L Leg: 60/60
Tail: 60/60


C U R R E N T A R M O R

NanoTech Armor
This barely there armor proves that less is more and more is not always better. Unlike other armor platings, NanoTech is bonded to a zoids base armor and does not require any external hard points. The unique properties of this armor allow it to regenerate damage and alter its physical properties.
This armor can regenerate 30 armor points to any damaged section each round, up to two sections can regenerate each round. NanoTech armor is also able to alter is physical structure to harden it self against certain types of damage (Heat, Energy, explosive, slashing or stabbing damage, etc). A charging feat must be used to activate this feature and the type of damage must be stated. While active this feature will reduce damage from the chosen type by 40%.
Armor Points: 50 per section


S P E C I A L S

Lightning Beam Cannons
A pair of 100mm beam cannons covering the back of the Zoid. Capable of firing powerful laser beams in the direction the Zoid is facing.
70dp

30mm Laser Repeaters
Located on the Saix's forehead are two 30mm laser repeaters. Each repeater is capable of firing consistently, spitting out roughly 12 shots per second. Though the silver mount they're on offers no turret what-so-ever, they fire where the Saix's head faces, and are quite accurate because of that.
20dp

Hardened Alloy Teeth and Claws
Razor-sharp fangs and rows of equally sharp teeth adorn the Saix's mouth while its paws contain sharp claws of their own.
50dp

Streamline Drafting
If more than one Saix is in the same battle they can use their body design to draft off each other and by continually leaping the front Zoid gain lots of speed and increase maneuverability adding damage to the next attack.
+10dp to next attack, increased rate of evasion by 10% per extra Saix


Narrative round 2:

Brad took a breath as he assessed the damage on his Zoid. The diagnostic came back that the front right leg was badly damaged along with some body damage on the right side. Not sure where to go next, Brad flipped the switch to his Nanotech Armor that charged up his lost armor on his right front leg and his right side of the body. (30dp+ to each) Then Brad leaped out from behind the rock and started to dodge the next shot. Then, Brad leaped out from behind the rock to get Clarence into his sights and fired a bold shot from his Lightning beam cannon (70dp) that targeted the left body of Clarence and as quickly as he could, started to dodge the next shot while he moved closer to Clarence to set up for his next attack.

Brad checked the progress on his armor and saw that it was almost done charging. With Clarence still in the sights of Brad’s Zoid, Brad ripped off the full amount of shells from his laser repeaters (20dp) which if connected should take out his other back leg. Right after the shots were fired Brad found the nearest rock structure to take cover from the certain shelling that should be coming his way.


Battle Summary

1a.Brad flipped the switch to his armor. Charging his leg and body armor.(30dp+ to both)
1b.Dodged to get ready for next shot (dodge)

2a. Fired a bold shot from his Lightning beam cannon to the left body. (70dp)
2b. dodged the next shot while moving closer (dodge)

3a. Ripped off shells from laser repeater to his back good leg. (20dp)
3b. Took cover to nearest rock structure (dodge)

Character's Name: Clarence Alexander (CLiX)
Pilot for the Guard

GL 1
0 AP
4 Skill Points -

Mental Ability: 2
Reflexes: 1
Proficiency: 1 (Melee)

1,500 Monetary Credits
30 RP Creds


Zoid Bay:

Zoid: Lightning Saix
Cheetah

Internal Slots- 2
Speed- 20
Agility- 40
Heat Index- 20

CPU Slots- 2
External Hardpoints- Body: (1 Left / 1 Right) Limbs: (None)

Armor- Head: 5 / Body: 37 left, 37 right / Legs (x4): 10 / Tail: 10

Current Armor/Stats:

Speed: 16
Agility: 32
Armor Current / Max
Head: 5/5
Body Left: 15/37
Body Right: 22/37
Front R Leg: 10/10
Front L Leg: 10/10
Rear R Leg: 0/10
Rear L Leg: 10/10
Tail: 10/10

Specials

Lightning Beam Cannons

A pair of 100mm beam cannons covering the back of the zoid. Capable of firing powerful laser beams in the direction the zoid is facing.

70dp

30mm Laser Repeaters

Located on the Saix's forehead are two 30mm laser repeaters. Each repeater is capable of firing consistently, spitting out roughly 12 shots per second. Though the silver mount they're on offers no turret what-so-ever, they fire where the Saix's head faces, and are quite accurate because of that.

20dp

Hardened Alloy Teeth and Claws

Razor-sharp fangs and rows of equally sharp teeth adorn the Saix's mouth while its paws contain sharp claws of their own.

50dp

Streamline Drafting

If more than one Saix is in the same battle they can use their body design to draft off each other and by continually leaping the front zoid gain lots of speed and increase maneuverability adding damage to the next attack.

+10dp to next attack, increased rate of evasion by 10% per extra Saix



Battle Phase:

The hit rattled Ihara. CLiX gritted his teeth, gripping the controls to keep her balanced. The lighting inside the cockpit dipped for a second, before brightening. The monitors displayed severe damage to his body armor, as well as a system freeze to his back right leg. If the situation hadn't been so serious, he could have laughed at how Ihara hopped around on three legs. She was still fast, though, just not as fast.

"This cave ain't for me."

Urging Ihara to give him as much speed as he could, he immediately launched down the cave, wincing as he heard the shots ring out from Brad's Zoid. As he ran, he could only hope that Brad would give chase, and he weaved as much as he could, darting side to side in the limited environment. Turning his Laser Repeaters up, He fired at the ceiling in such a manner that the falling debris would harmlessly fall behind him, but hopefully not for Brad, that is, if he had decided to give chase. He glanced back, only to see clouds of dust and smoke behind him.

"Great. Now I couldn't see him if I wanted."

As he exited the cave, he immediately turned to face the mouth of the cave, and let loose a blast from his Lightning Beam Cannon into the smoke. If Brad was in there, as CLiX could only hope he was, then maybe he would hit something vital. If not, he just wasted a shot. Wasting no time, he pulled the controls to the left, urging Ihara to hop to the left, as to avoid any return fire from the mouth of the cave.


Battle Summary:

1.a. Weaving within the confines of the cave (Dodge.)
1.b. Firing upwards at the cave ceiling with the Laser Repeaters, Causing smoke and hopefully rock damage. (Attack, Possible rock damage?)
2.a. Fired a round from the LBC into the cloud of smoke. (70dp, no intentional target)
2.b. Dodged to the right as soon as he left the cave. (Dodge.)

((I apologize for the delay, life hit me fast this weekend))

Brad
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You used the phrase "Then Brad leaped out from behind the rock" twice in quick succession, this was not the only time you used similar or exact phrases in close succession, but it was the most noticable. Try to be more careful about your word choices to avoid rapid repitition. Also, I forgot to mention this last time, please leave the dp amounts for the action summary and leave them out of the RP, thank you, good post

Clarence
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You don't have to set a seperate paragraph aside for speech unless it's unclear who is talking, or if you are currently describing the actions of another character (which would make the person speaking unclear...). I noticed a few small grammar errors, like "Repeaters up, He fired" and there it's just an extra space and an H that should ahve been lower case, not a huge deal, but still try to watch out for it. Looks good apart from that, good post

Note, color coding, Blue = healed only, Purple = Some heal, some damage, Red = Damage only

Brad

Speed: 16
Agility: 32
Armor Current / Max
Head: 55/55
Body Left: 55/87
Body Right: 75/87
Front R Leg: 0/60
Front L Leg: 25/60
Rear R Leg: 60/60
Rear L Leg: 60/60
Tail: 60/60

Clarence

Speed: 8
Agility: 20
Armor Current / Max
Head: 5/5
Body Left: 15/37
Body Right: 22/37
Front R Leg: 10/10
Front L Leg: 10/10
Rear R Leg: 0/10
Rear L Leg: 0/10
Tail: 10/10

Clarence managed to keep out of the way of Brads Lightning Beam Cannon as he ran out of the arm. Brad seemed more concerned with getting his damaged bits of armor repaired. Brad forgot on the fly though that the nanotechnology only repairs armor, not mechanical damage. So while his body armor would be fine, that leg would keep jerking. This unexpected jerkiness was the most likely cause of the miss from that cannon, though Clarence's zoid was also just finally coming down from its sprint high.

As Brad gave chase to Clarence, his time spent lining up a shot to his opponents better working back leg payed off in that it hit, right before Brad himself fell under a barrage of rocks from above. Against his expensive armor though, the damage was hardly noticeable. Brad wisely hid behind some rocks in the dust that had been swiftly kicked up amongst all the falling rock. At least, it seemed like a wise decision until Clarence had a bit of blind luck and blasted the rock Brad was hiding behind, sending heavy shrapnel all over the left side of the zoid.

All in all, Clarence seemed to be doing well, but Brads foresight in getting that new armor was definitely paying off, Clarence wasn't likely to last much longer with two legs down either. Was it only a matter of moments before Brad finished it? Or would Clarence come back from behind for a spectacular win?

Edit, realized I didn't give a posting order, Clarence first this time

Ihara shook as the blast hit. The little model of Ihara on the dash flashed, as the other rear leg flashed up red. Ihara hopped as he moved, even more ludicrous looking than when she was hopping on just three. He panted, glancing at the mouth of the cave, dust still rolling out... Brad was still in that cave. He took a moment to assess his situation. Low speed, low agility... "I can't out maneuver him... well..." He glanced up... "Maybe... a cave in?"

He turned Ihara, in her odd, hopping gait, to face the cave once more. He knew this move was desperate, and that there was a possibility that it wouldn't work. He aimed for the area's he suspected help hold the cave up, and let loose, his fingers pulling the triggers. Ihara shook a bit, as she had hardly any stabilization; she couldn't brace herself with her back legs. Regardless, the glowing energy shot from the Lightning Beam Cannon, and collided with the stone structure of the cave. Pushing Ihara as fast as she could go, he moved, and launched another shot from the LBC. Without turning to look, he urged her away, hoping that with all the smoke and calamity he could escape.

Urging her to go faster, he piloted her to the cave that would be the right point of the star, sighing with relief as the protective coat of darkness surrounded him.

Summary.

1.a.) Attack cave structure with Lightning Beam Cannon. (Shrapnel/cave in damage?)
1.b.) Dodge across, to position for the new target. (Dodge)
2.a.) Attack cave structure with Lightning Beam Cannon. (Shrapnel/cave in damage?)
2.b.) Moved into the top right cave for cover (Dodge.)

Edit by Taillon; modify button was gone for Clarence, so I had him PM me the corrected form of his actions

Brad round 3

Speed: 16
Agility: 32
Armor Current / Max
Head: 55/55
Body Left: 55/87
Body Right: 75/87
Front R Leg: 0/60
Front L Leg: 25/60
Rear R Leg: 60/60
Rear L Leg: 60/60
Tail: 60/60

The rock smashed up against the left side of Brad’s Zoid. He cringed as he assessed the damage. Brad could not believe that the rock blew up like that and caused that much damage. Brad did not have any cover but he knew Clarence did not have much mobility with the rear legs out of commission so Brad took the advantage and fired his Laser repeaters at the left body of Clarence’s Zoid then as quickly as possible; Brad moved to dodge the next attack.

After he had taken cover, Brad assessed the situation of his armor and noticed he had to recharge before too long. “Clarence’s Zoid had to not have much left. I need to finish this!” Brad leaped out from cover to line up his shot and jammed the trigger down on the Laser cannon that sent a shot that screamed towards the crawling Lightning Saix’s right side. “If that shot does not hit then the rocks around should do some damage.” After the shot Brad shot off towards Clarence in a side to side attempt to dodge the return fire, which set up his next attack.

Brad approached Clarence rather quickly due to the damaged sustained on Clarence. Brad mashed the controls forward and this sent the Lightning Saix in a direct line towards the enemy Lightning Saix, Brad leaped in for a slash from the sharp claws equipped on the Saix targeting the front left leg. As soon as he attacked he flipped the switch again to his armor which charged his front left leg and the left section of his body. “This should nearly restore the armor completely on those parts”, thought Brad as his Zoid’s armor charged. “We almost have him Jax. Hang with me”, said Brad.

Battle Summary

1a. Brad Fired Laser repeaters to left body. (20dp)
1b. Brad moved to dodge next shot or rocks. Dodge

2a. Jammed trigger down Laser Cannon targeting right side. (70dp, maybe with Rock damage)
2b. shot off side to side. Dodge

3a. Leaped in for a slash from sharp claws to front leg. (50dp)
3b. Charged Nanotech armor to restore front left leg and left section of body. (30DP+ back to both)

Anyone reading this please note that these were reposts from the original site where the battle started, anything that was coded was ignored.

I believe Taillon will still be judging this or will state otherwise if he decides not to, I think life is swamping his time right now but he should be with you soon.